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01-14-10, 08:04 PM
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Wu Tang Is For The Children
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Back from a long vacation
havnt really been on the mic in like...4years...got signed to an indi. label last year...
i trust your opinions...so heres two songs on the main page id like your feedback on... http://www.edwords.ning.com __________________ In the process of recording my debut album "Multiple Myselfs" |
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01-14-10, 08:28 PM
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The Network
AKA: Dkaid
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Knoxville, TN
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No $: The beat is nice and chill. I miss this type of beat. I need to listen to more East Coast stuff. Both artists sound good. I like that both are using multi's and a more complex structure than the average stuff you hear online. Quality is good. The chorus is really the lacking part of the song. I understood where it was going, but I don't feel it was executed that well. Too "jokey" for a serious sounding beat. Incongruence.
From the Ground Up: The rhythm of the intro (chorus I'm guessing and hoping) is awesome. You laid that out nicely. The back-ups during this first verse sound nice. They really enhanced it to me. But the delivery of the main vocals was good too. I'm already preferring this over "No $". Yeah, that intro was the chorus. That's a nice chorus. __________________ .................................................. - The Dkaid.com Interlink - ..................................................
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01-14-10, 11:52 PM
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Wu Tang Is For The Children
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much appreciated.
just to be clear for anyone else listening...all the verse's are me, "No $" only has Rucka Rucka Ali on the hook. i recorded "From The Ground Up" 3days ago, so far its my favorite track. again. thank you for the feedback. __________________ In the process of recording my debut album "Multiple Myselfs" |
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01-15-10, 04:17 PM
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KING BBQ
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Cool. I will check them out later and report back.
__________________ R.I.P Jonny Vicious. See you, space cowboy. zomg my livejournal, wtf wtf http://demonicgerbil.livejournal.com zomg my band, wtf wtf http://myspace.com/fractalrapture 
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01-15-10, 06:19 PM
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The Network
AKA: Dkaid
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Knoxville, TN
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__________________ .................................................. - The Dkaid.com Interlink - ..................................................
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01-16-10, 02:07 PM
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lol its all good. the track originally had another artist (Robo Robb) on it, but our styles didnt mesh that well so we stripped his vocals off and i wrote and recorded the first verse like 2weeks later, after it got mastered i realized that the two sounded different...said forget it n kept it that way.
__________________ In the process of recording my debut album "Multiple Myselfs" |
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01-17-10, 12:55 AM
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KING BBQ
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From the Ground Up has a real nice flow in your lyrics. I like it a lot.
Jerkin Off had me laughing. I hope that was the intent, because I can't take it seriously. No $ didn't do much for me, but the mix was pretty great. The vocals all had some nice depth to them. I echo DKAID's sentiment about the chorus. The beat is made of win and awesome. I think I'd like to get that without vocals over it and add it to my "Music to use while working" list. Edit: Awesome to see you back around here, dude. __________________ R.I.P Jonny Vicious. See you, space cowboy. zomg my livejournal, wtf wtf http://demonicgerbil.livejournal.com zomg my band, wtf wtf http://myspace.com/fractalrapture
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